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novakin says

This is my second WordPress theme submission, the previous one was rejected so i created new one and want a little help before i submit the theme. I want to adjust my self creating premium themes for ThemeForest. This theme is not completed all the way yet but the main stuff 85% – 90% are there…

http://www.simplexthemes.com/ziliander

Thanks in advance…

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gokhan214 says

increase the line height and spacing of the logo slogan where it sais;

Be the change that you wish to see in the world.

and maybe add some more content at the bottom of the home page and go for it, if it is not approved, i ll cut my hands off :D

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novakin says

Thanks for the reply gokhan214, i will note that :D…

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egemenerd says

You need to work on whitespace first, this article may help you; http://webdesignledger.com/tips/whitespace-the-underutilized-design-element

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Flay says

Yea, I think that white-space is the main issue here. Also the contrast between elements and the “flow” isn’t very clear. Good luck.

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novakin says

Thank you all for answering. I will make those changes and submit the theme and i hope it will be accepted…

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ReaxionGraphics says

In a way I’m repeating but might be more specific, I think you need way more right and left margin/padding in your containers. The easiest to spot is in the footer, like how “© Ziliander 2012” touches the left side of the footer, and making your “read more” columns narrower will naturally give you more space to work with! I suppose once your padding is done, just make sure it is consistent from top to bottom…

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novakin says

Thanks, im working on it right now :D

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Nitro_Themes says

Honestly i like it but the colors are terrible i mean the blue line and the orange line try to use the gray scale instead of those vibrant colors.

Cheers

Lester

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novakin says

Thanks for the advice…

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