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Artureanec says

Hi guys!

I’ve just finished some corrections to my psd theme (aligment, spacing, typography)
And I would like to know if you like it.
Did I do everything correct?
Did I choose correct line height between the headlines, paragraph, or space betwine block, pictures, etc.
I used a 960 grid system.
my previos version – http://goo.gl/MXe7k
LAST VERSION (BIG SIZE )

Thanks and Best regards

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Anps says

It looks great, special love that it doesn’t have masiv effects, like shadows etc.

But i don’t know about reviewers. If it was up to me i would pass you :)

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Artureanec says

It looks great, special love that it doesn’t have masiv effects, like shadows etc. But i don’t know about reviewers. If it was up to me i would pass you :)

Thanks Anps !

What about typography, Alignment, etc. is it ok ?

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Anps says

Maybe i would widen the horizontal spacings, but i am not certain since my design got rejected to :) tho i don’t know how you intend to code this, is this index page? coz it seems a bit long, maybe it would look better if you remove the what we do and testimonials since it seems some how forced in there. I always kind of went for the less is more but i am kind of new on themeforest.

About typography.. its cool in my opinion tho it always was my achilles heel.

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DarkNurbs says

i wish someone gave me feedbacks like that…

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Artureanec says

Thanks, Crozer!

It’s best comment to my work ))) It was very help me.

But I am quite confused in alignment. I used 960 gs.

What do you think about it? Maybe I’m wrong in something?

I read a lot of information about the alignment and typography, and came to 960 gs. I think this is a good solution for this theme.

Thanks! Artur
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Artureanec says

Please, take a look now.

I specially left the grid on, so you can see the aligment.

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crozer says

Please, take a look now.

I specially left the grid on, so you can see the aligment.

It’s not about the grid-alignment per se, but rather about the alignment, margin, padding, spacing and filling of the elements within it. See my notes on the image I posted above.

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xstortionist says

Grid spacing is fine, but many of the elements seem a bit rushed and not well thought. Did you by chance sketch this before you started designing? I keep seeing this a lot in the forums. People just start designing with really no idea where they are going with their design. Not a very good idea and def. doesn’t work that way in the business world either. Treat your designs like a job from a client.

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