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Deltac0
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Click me

Yea, what you think about it, what should I improve? It’s one of my first HTML templates, so I’m just asking this even before submitting for review.

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Deltac0
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Could anybody please help? I know I’m not going to get it approved as it is now, so I want some feedback.

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LoveThemes
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Sorry dude, but its bad.

EVERYTHING need work, design, typography, spacing.

Go back to the drawing board, learn more about design. Study sites like Dribbble, Creattica etc..

-Scott

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Deltac0
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Sorry dude, but its bad.

EVERYTHING need work, design, typography, spacing.

Go back to the drawing board, learn more about design. Study sites like Dribbble, Creattica etc..

-Scott

Thank you. I really knew someone would say this. Well, I’ll try to learn more. Thanks :)

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beetlesales
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You definitely need some inspiration. I suggest reviewing the other 404 pages for sale here on TF.

http://themeforest.net/category/site-templates/specialty-pages/4-4-pages
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