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billyf says

Just like quite a number of other people here, my item has been rejected and I’ve been told to improve on my typography. Sadly, typography has always been my ‘weakness’ and I really appreciate any suggestions to improve it.

Besides, I would also like to get some comments / ideas for my layout design, if you have any.

Thanks for helping and have a great day!

http://i45.tinypic.com/2uzdrhz.png

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billyf says

I don’t think I can edit my first post, so here is the same image at 100% magnification.

http://i45.tinypic.com/15qt46a.png

Thanks for any input to this thread :)

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sixemkay says

Hi Billy,

I recommend making the main text lighter in color (for more contrast). I would also make the type a little larger or make the main body column a little narrower (it’s easier to read a long line of text if the type is larger. When it is small type you want to keep the columns shorter)

I hope that helps! You did a nice job :)

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billyf says

Thanks for the comments :) I am now in the progress of fixing the problems now.

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