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Artureanec says

Hi guys!

I’m just starting on themeforest. And would like to know what do you think about my first design. This is a sketch of home page. I need some constructive critic from guru of design)) If my theme needs some improvement, tell me please what I should do for approovmet my theme on themeforest.

Best regards!

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FRESHFACE says

I love the smell of fresh criticism in the morning :)

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Artureanec says

freshface, Thanks alot ! I really appreciate your opinion! Maybe someone else have thoughts abot this theme?

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charlie4282 says

agree with most of the above – A working demo if you have one would be helpful to give a proper opinion? In general (plus the tweaks suggested above) I would definitely buy the theme from you right now – its really really good. There will always be room for improvement but the obvious changes (colours aside) are very very minor ones. Great work – let us know when there is a working version to see. Good luck

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Pixelous says

Frehface, so good critic what do you think about my theme?

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Artureanec says

Thank you all for your answers !! What do you think about the typography of template?

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cre8themes says

the main issues are what everybody said so for…fix the navigation..it’s hard to observe it..make it stand out more and put in right or left corner…also…what’s the more from blog section? (footer)..it looks like a flick or photostream:)

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Pixelous says

Sorry, what about my template? http://livedemo04.prestatrend.com/

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crozer says

Alignment.

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Artureanec says

Alignment.

Thanks, Crozer! Please, more about alignment on this theme. I want to understand more about typography.

Thanks!

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