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Artureanec
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Hi guys!

I’m just starting on themeforest. And would like to know what do you think about my first design. This is a sketch of home page. I need some constructive critic from guru of design)) If my theme needs some improvement, tell me please what I should do for approovmet my theme on themeforest.

Best regards!

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FRESHFACE
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I love the smell of fresh criticism in the morning :)

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Artureanec
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freshface, Thanks alot ! I really appreciate your opinion! Maybe someone else have thoughts abot this theme?

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charlie4282
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agree with most of the above – A working demo if you have one would be helpful to give a proper opinion? In general (plus the tweaks suggested above) I would definitely buy the theme from you right now – its really really good. There will always be room for improvement but the obvious changes (colours aside) are very very minor ones. Great work – let us know when there is a working version to see. Good luck

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Pixelous
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Frehface, so good critic what do you think about my theme?

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Artureanec
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Thank you all for your answers !! What do you think about the typography of template?

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cre8themes
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the main issues are what everybody said so for…fix the navigation..it’s hard to observe it..make it stand out more and put in right or left corner…also…what’s the more from blog section? (footer)..it looks like a flick or photostream:)

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Pixelous
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Sorry, what about my template? http://livedemo04.prestatrend.com/

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crozer
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Alignment.

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Artureanec
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Alignment.

Thanks, Crozer! Please, more about alignment on this theme. I want to understand more about typography.

Thanks!

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