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designsatnight says

My goal is to get this accepted on TF, and get good sales.

I don’t have a footer yet, but the navigation, the about, the services, the faw, the portfolio, and the contact form is ready.

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dorbens says

I give you almost 10 for the visual effects, well done
There are a few things you should improve though:

The icons are really boring, they seems dead to me. dude! choose something fancy and intresting!

Spacing issues
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You should also consider replace the “back” arrow.. circular arrow will convey the target much more then “right” arrow

Dor


My goal is to get this accepted on TF, and get good sales.

I don’t have a footer yet, but the navigation, the about, the services, the faw, the portfolio, and the contact form is ready.

link here

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dorbens says

double by mistake.

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designsatnight says

thank you! it’s great to read an other perspective on it, I’ll go through the parts you mentioned thank you

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designsatnight says

please TF, I have months of work on rejected themes behind me, I deserve some feedback.

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iHelp says

If you think you deserve feedback for your hard work contact the reviewers. I don’t see how other authors are obligated to give feedback :)

I feel like your design is a little empty. It has a lack of details and love. The fonts don’t do it for me. Everything is so big, the circles, the animation, the content areas. Good luck!

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designsatnight says

If you think you deserve feedback for your hard work contact the reviewers. I don’t see how other authors are obligated to give feedback :) I feel like your design is a little empty. It has a lack of details and love. The fonts don’t do it for me. Everything is so big, the circles, the animation, the content areas. Good luck!

that was anything but helpful but thanks

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designsatnight says

new version here

added more portfolio pages, 2 blog pages, and different font

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WebDesignFudge says

Hey designsatnight

Huge improvement from the 1st one, I like it, The circles on the home page maybe needs a but more detail? I would add a bit more detail to the header, it looks a bit lost, but I really like the overall look and feel of your theme. Good Luck!

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designsatnight says

Hey designsatnight Huge improvement from the 1st one, I like it, The circles on the home page maybe needs a but more detail? I would add a bit more detail to the header, it looks a bit lost, but I really like the overall look and feel of your theme. Good Luck!

thank you!

Yes I also feel the lack of some extra details here and there. The whole thing is less than 60% ready so I guess it’ll take another week or so.

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