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AdamGold says

Tried another style, I think I really improved in designing things :D

http://reviewmydesign.net/index.php?bb_attachments=&bbat=1103&inline

What do you think? Thanks.

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Neon_ says

I think the colours of the background jump a little too much and come out a little harsh, more so fading from the red I think, as well as the “read more” and “purchase” buttons could look a little more sharp, perhaps just by refining the edges a bit more, but I like the overall style on this one.

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QwibbleDesigns says

I like it but the background is too bright, especially the red on the right. It draws me right away from the content. As for the content, it seems a bit bland, and theres no footers. Its got potential though =)

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AdamGold says

What do you think I should put instead of the red on the right? I don’t it too.

And as for the content, what do you mean by “bland”?

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adam_robinson says

the shadow under the iphone seems a little harsh too. try adding a smaller and softer shadow to make it look more realistic

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AdamGold says

Trying to think of something instead of the red, and to improve the buttons. Mean while, improved the shadows: http://reviewmydesign.net/index.php?bb_attachments=&bbat=1106&inline

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fillerspace says

Maybe add a kitten…everybody loves kittens!

JK! But seriously, it needs a footer to anchor the design at the bottom. And it could just be my O/C side, but the circles in the background aren’t perfectly round. Maybe this is intentional, but it looks off to me. They should be true circles. Same with the iPhone behind the other iPhone – it’s squished…maintain the aspect ratio when resizing photos or other recognizable objects.

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Headset says
That POPS ! :D Reference : http://theoatmeal.com/comics/design_hell

This is hilarious! :D

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Ivor Reviewer says

Me no likey :D

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