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Flash_Cart says

Be easy on the noob!

Great start, drop shadow is supa heavy, though it has potential.

Typography a little crazy, though not hard to fix for easier readability.

Overall, keep working.

8-)

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Massfocus says
That POPS ! :D Reference : http://theoatmeal.com/comics/design_hell

hahaha this is brilliant ! was lolling al over :D

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AdamGold says

Ok, I want to improve this design so for a start I decided to make a new background. (thanks Alex)

http://reviewmydesign.net/index.php?bb_attachments=&bbat=1108&inline

Is it better?

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AdamGold says

Someone?

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DDStudios says
Someone?

It’s not better. It’s the same.

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Ivor Envato team says
Someone?
It’s not better. It’s the same.

Ditto.

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64bit says

It’s not the background, it’s the content they’re on about. That needs improving.

And damn, I hate that +1, ditto-style comment things you lot do. It’s a waste of commenting. Put a “like” button there instead. Gah.

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