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vaynah
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Hola!

My latest file was rejected as it needed some improvement. Here is the preview: http://youtu.be/2wPk3LmEjBA

Reviewer’s comment:

“The log-in concept is nice but the crossfade into the logo doesnt exactly seem like someone gaining access via a log-in.”

Any suggestions on how to reveal the logo after the login? All help will be appreciated

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Wayman
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Hi my friend,

Nice work! Maybe you need in the end just rotate the log-in’s form so that the other side will reveal a logo of company. Just thoughts… :)

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3dbacks
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“they” don’t like fade in fade out:)

Hola!

My latest file was rejected as it needed some improvement. Here is the preview: http://youtu.be/2wPk3LmEjBA

Reviewer’s comment:

“The log-in concept is nice but the crossfade into the logo doesnt exactly seem like someone gaining access via a log-in.”

Any suggestions on how to reveal the logo after the login? All help will be appreciated

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felt_tips
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I would say that that is a judgement of taste and not of quality.

The fade is done well, there is no requirement for an animation showing a computer log-in screen to be totally authentic. The fact that you would need to log into a logo is more conceptually difficult than the crossfade.

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EFEKT_Studio
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I would say that that is a judgement of taste and not of quality. The fade is done well, there is no requirement for an animation showing a computer log-in screen to be totally authentic. The fact that you would need to log into a logo is more conceptually difficult than the crossfade.

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vaynah
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Thanks for the input guys, I think I got something in mind which will hopefully get the file accepted :)

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andrenavarre
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I am surprised that got rejected. It looks good. I guess the reviewer likes it and wants you to maximize its potential. My only suggestion would be to make it appear to “pop” out. Like a speech bubble pop up, somewhat bouncy. Like scale up a bit then all the way down into nothingness. You could also go on Themeforest and test out some live previews of sites with animated front end user logins, you can get inspiration from the real thing!

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PerfectFX
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There’s definitely missing some quick action after you clicked the button, but not that slow fade in/out thing :)

Though, in general, nice and simple idea!

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