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Enabled Volunteer moderator says

I am making a new file, trouble is I’d really love some constructive criticism from you folks. Click here and tell me what you think .

And another thing? Like it ? :D

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CodingJack says

I really like it :)

I wonder if it would look even cleaner without the title backgrounds.

I’d also like to see the line that is underneath the logo tween in from the right instead of the left.

Other than a few tweeks I think you’ve got a winner :)

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Enabled Volunteer moderator says
I really like it :)

I wonder if it would look even cleaner without the title backgrounds.

I’d also like to see the line that is underneath the logo tween in from the right instead of the left.

Other than a few tweeks I think you’ve got a winner :)

Thanks Jack. Very glad you like it! I was afraid it’s not minimalist but simple, seems the transitions hit the jackpot :). By the way. You got mail.

Anyone else want to share their opinion? Please?

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patrickjansen says

One thing I didn’t specifically like was the content-font. Weird “e” and “g”s. Might not hurt to experiment a bit with that choice. Just a thought

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Laith says

@Enabled You are Genius :inlove: my friend, i like that very much :D

a small suggestion: maybe a cool background (ex: gradient background) will give it another special look

Good luck my Friend :D :D: D

Cheers

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theflyingtinman says

Very nice. I like it. However, I agree with PJ about the content font. .. but totally disagree with Laith about the gradient background :)

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patrickjansen and theflyingtinman Thank you very much for your reviews guys, I will take care of the font and replace it soon. Just need to find a worthy adversary to this one. I believe this one looks really nice but I do agree, it looks strange when it comes to “e” and “g”.

Laith It would probably look okay with a gradient, but it would ruin the entire minimalist aspect!

Thanks guys a lot! Really appreciate it :)

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ThemeProvince says

Im not being rude (well a bit) but I don’t think this would get accepted with its current design. It needs some more work on its graphical elements.

  • The font needs to be changed.
  • The black lines are very sharp and need to be a lighter more subtle colour.
  • The fonts seem to be a bit blurry aswell as the icons.
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Im not being rude (well a bit) but I don’t think this would get accepted with its current design. It needs some more work on its graphical elements.
  • The font needs to be changed.
  • The black lines are very sharp and need to be a lighter more subtle colour.
  • The fonts seem to be a bit blurry aswell as the icons.

I know they are a little blurry. Im bit rude either but ever heard of resizable,full xml, bitmap smoothimg? :-P withiu adding those to the icons and logo they would have looked horible…

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KrownThemes says

PNG files don’t need to be smoothed :) If you turn smoothing on for png files, they look really bad. Instead, make sure that they are in rounded positions, and you will have no trouble. In your current configuration, the social icons look really bad.

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