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touringxx says

Buddy in the date the font is not adequate and is very simple like the title, Title is to much basic add lights and stars, play with something like that. Dont give up keep trying!!! :)

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thomask3r says

Pickoora: Thanks for the feedback! The squirrels are included:)

touringxx: Thanks! I’ve allready added lights to the title, and it shouldn’t be too much. Don’t seem like the reviewers are to much into that these days.

Heres an update. Still alot of work to do I guess?

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thomask3r says
xstortionist said
Type needs a lot of work. Also, there shouldn’t be gradients on all the type at the bottom… it’s very hard to read. Gradients on text is generally hard to read unless you have good contrast with the background.

I see what you mean. When I compare my typo against the accepted files, there is a lack of quality. Seems like have alot to work on! Thanks for the feedback :)

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thomask3r says
xstortionist said
and remove the rodents at top, it just looks horsey with them there. Like they are not supposed to be there in the first place. They’re driving me nuts… no pun intended.

haha, maybe you’re right. I was just suprised to find such high quality pictures without any copyrights :p

Better?

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Pickoora says

DJ Winter DJ Frosty DJ Snow

Still hard to read.

And the satin on the text at top doesnt look too great.

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thomask3r says
Pickoora said
DJ Winter DJ Frosty DJ Snow

Still hard to read.

And the satin on the text at top doesnt look too great.

Okey, thanks:)

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