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ucarwebnet says

New My Template Please provide feedback

http://onnumarareklam.com/newtheme.jpg
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Kronris says

I feel like i’ve already seen this design, i don’t know where :impatient:
Nevermind, good template, except the typography, i think you have to improve that with some google font or cufon…

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ucarwebnet says

I feel like i’ve already seen this design, i don’t know where :impatient:
Nevermind, good template, except the typography, i think you have to improve that with some google font or cufon…

I’m glad you like It has the same designs There are similar designs to be sold, but in psd format

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Mahioo says
  • The typo is rough! Try change the font and play with the font properties ..
  • The color schema is not comfortable for eyes ..
  • The widget on the sidebar need more work, it’s not enough to highlight the active widget with only change there title color (I’m talking where Comments and Tags .. etc found), try add some shadow, texture, border etc ..
  • The search icon and top social icons need a recheck for sure!
  • I don’t know what the dribbble logo doing on the top left :P

This is what I can see now :)

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ucarwebnet says

  • The typo is rough! Try change the font and play with the font properties ..
  • The color schema is not comfortable for eyes ..
  • The widget on the sidebar need more work, it’s not enough to highlight the active widget with only change there title color (I’m talking where Comments and Tags .. etc found), try add some shadow, texture, border etc ..
  • The search icon and top social icons need a recheck for sure!
  • I don’t know what the dribbble logo doing on the top left :P
This is what I can see now :)

See the last edit nigh but color remained

http://www.onnumarareklam.com/newtheme1.jpg
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Mahioo says

The search icon is good, the social also, but the multicolor social logo doesn’t go together, so I advise to unify the colors, and make a same effect when hover for ex ..

The widget is more better than the first, but it still need an improvement, perhaps remove the bottom border of the active widget to make a feeling like it’s on the same level with the contents ..

The typo is style rough, the bold text of the post for ex, the white space between paragraph and title, the size of font, all them need a fix ..

The color scheme is still inconvenient from my opinion, and the dribbble logo still found on the top left, and I don’t why :D

I’m sorry because I feel you that the design need a lot of improvements, but to be honest, the design is not really ready :(

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PaddyTaylor says

As others have said:

Typography is all over the place
Spacing needs work
Footer has two widgets then the center bit then 1 widget?
Logo needs work
The colours are a little inaccessible

All in all you have a building block but with respect it looks like a free theme to me and is not up to the standard for here as it is.

Will be easier to give constructive feedback when it is a working version. Good luck

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ucarwebnet says

As others have said:

Typography is all over the place
Spacing needs work
Footer has two widgets then the center bit then 1 widget?
Logo needs work
The colours are a little inaccessible

All in all you have a building block but with respect it looks like a free theme to me and is not up to the standard for here as it is.

Will be easier to give constructive feedback when it is a working version. Good luck

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