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Hi, I’m Daniel Ortiz, a Brazilian web designer (are there more Brazilians out there?). Up to now, I only worked for local clients or for design agencies. Unfortunately, the money I am making barely can afford my bills, then I realized that if I manage to sell 15 themes per month here I would be making more money than I usually make. As it is the first theme I make for a wider public, I’d love to receive your feedback.

http://imageshack.us/a/img196/2134/khu1.jpg http://imageshack.us/a/img17/8303/dh89.jpg

There’s still a lot to do, a lot of functionalities that I’m planning to implement, but this is the overall look.

Thank you in advance, Daniel

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anybody?

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Generally its really nice. Obviously depends what the other pages end up looking like. I think the footer could be better and be cautious with some of the typography. Don’t over do the italics and line heights

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Generally its really nice. Obviously depends what the other pages end up looking like. I think the footer could be better and be cautious with some of the typography. Don’t over do the italics and line heights
Thank you, Charlie,

Could you be more specific about the line heights problems? I totally agree with the footer, I spent very short time on it because I was leaving home and wanted to post it here before I leave. Same applies to the logo. Uploaded it on redpen http://redpen.io/w47tn9

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RedPen’d it for you. Good luck

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It was really kind of you, Charlie. All those things you pointed will really help me out.

I will definitely improve it and move forward to the other pages, than I post again. Thank you again.

Meanwhile if someone else has something to point out, you’re more than welcome.

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