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mafloral says

Anyone else have any ideas or some feedback? Any feedback is welcome.

Cheers

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billyf says

Quite a good start, but I think you can still improve it by adding more details throughout the design.

For the header :
The dropdown menu shouldn’t be much larger than the parent menu items, so you should consider reducing the height of those children menu items. The logo is a bit dull (yes, it does affect the result in the reviewing process), so try something more creative for it.

For content :
The slider (especially the ‘buttons’ at the bottom) doesn’t seem to fit the overall design principle of your theme. Maybe you can do something on it. Typography and spacing can be significantly improved and please use a visual hierarchy for different titles. The ‘Top’ link at the bottom right needs repositioning as my scrollbar is overlapping on it.

At blog archive :
Sidebar widgets also lack details. ‘Read More’ buttons do not need tooltip, it just distracts the user.

Packages page :
This page needs a lot of polishing. It looks totally unfinished.

Overall, some texts need better contrast as I have some difficulty reading them in your page and you also need to polish everything before it can be accepted by the review team. Good luck.

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mafloral says

Thanks Billy

I will definitely work on the items you mentioned. As i said the file is not yet ready i was just looking for some early feedback on the template.

Thanks again

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dnp_theme says
Some fixes:
  • the pattern is too much, it’s disturbing and it should be more subtle, creates chromatic aberrations around text
  • the paragraphs mush NOT be ALL CAPS
  • I don’t like the main menu
  • typo needs improvements
  • the carousel here is out of the window size http://lementstudios.com/bliss/news.html
  • you need more unique design features heavily

Best of luck.

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mafloral says

Thanks DNP

What do you mean by the news carousel? I tested it on a few mobile devices and it looks ok to me.

Also what do you mean by unique design features heavily?

What don’t you like about the main menu?

What is wrong with the typography?

Let me know and be brief don’t worry i can take the critique.

Thanks

Lester

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