Sound OK, the Whistling is definitely weird and timing is strange to….. Popular authors do work on promoting there work full time, at some point it will work out!
I could see using a little of the robotic piano in your song as an effect, but it’s too much for too long. It could use some dynamics, for sure. And yes, DO offer a version without vocals.
Thanks for the responses. It all helps. No samples. it’s all me!! I am no whistler so will employ my husband in future who is a builder and so can whistle very well hee hee!
The piano was quantized and that’s all, but my sustain pedal is knackered so that might be why you think it sounds a bit robotic, I shall sort that out. But I will make more effort to ensure my piano work sounds natural and not get near a mic with my whistling in future!!!
Thanks for support guys x
it’s more of a loop, then a song. It’s very catchy though. Maybe it helps to build more instruments around it such as bass and drums.