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EladChai says

Hi guys,

I’m not quite sure what should I do.

This is the rejection feedback:

The technique and construction are quite impressive, but it is lacking conceptually. If you strip away the gradients, gloss, etc., the base shapes are not very interesting. Logos often have to be reproduced in black and white or flat color, so they have to hold up without the extra dimension that the gradients, etc. bring to the shapes. Give some thought to what kind of companies could use the logo and work toward that. It’s not a sphere, but I see you have the word “egg” in the tags. It’s not quite an egg shape, but that might be a direction to go in. Again, the technique is very good – you can almost reach out and grab the object, but the problem is, what is the object and how is it used?

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Great feedback TBH, but I don’t know what should I do.

Do I just need to think of a perfect name title to fit the logo shape? Or do I need to re-work the logo shape (hope not :D )?

I’m quite confused because this was hard rejected and not soft rejected. Maybe was a mistake? Don’t know.

Can someone help me out please? Also some good names to fit the logo would be great :) Thanks!

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LuisFaus says

Put it vertically and make two side by side. It will look like lungs and a ribcage. You might need to remodel a bit.

But could be a logo for a clinic to stop smoking or something of the sort of lung health.

That is the first thing that it reminds me of when i look at it anyway.

Hope it helps!

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hawkmax says

Hey,

It looks like a shell to me. Go for a concept which has protection in it The lines seem to be protecting the shape inside according to me.

These companies can use your logo.

  • Data Protection
  • Antivirus
  • Packers & Movers (Safe Delivery)
  • Courier services
  • Delivery
Things like that. Hope the reviewer gets this too.

Goodluck.

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ShermanJackson says

Hey,

It looks like a shell to me. Go for a concept which has protection in it The lines seem to be protecting the shape inside according to me.

These companies can use your logo.

  • Data Protection
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Things like that. Hope the reviewer gets this too.
Goodluck.

Looks like an oyster shell :-)

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gbs says

Yeah, agree with some guys above, definitely looks more like a shell rather than “egg” or “sphere”. I think the reviewer was only trying to understand what is the object here, and I don’t know if you’re trying to build a shell shape or not but it maybe a direction to make clear to the reviewer.

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EladChai says

Thanks a lot guys. I was also thinking that it looks like a shell/oyster.

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beerlover says

The only thing i say is that it is a very great logo.

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Alexlasek says


Hey,

It looks like a shell to me. Go for a concept which has protection in it The lines seem to be protecting the shape inside according to me.

These companies can use your logo.

  • Data Protection
  • Antivirus
  • Packers & Movers (Safe Delivery)
  • Courier services
  • Delivery
Things like that. Hope the reviewer gets this too.
Goodluck.
Looks like an oyster shell :-)

that was my first idea.

There is something wrong with fonts ;/

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EladChai says

I’ve tried like 800 fonts and couldn’t find a better one :D

Suggestions are always welcome :)

Btw, I uploaded this:

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Is it better?

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EladChai says

Rejected again.

What is going on? :O There was no feedback.

The first time it sounded like the reviewer was overwhelmed with the high quality of this logo and the only problem seems to be the Brand Name or something. And now it’s rejected for the second time. I really don’t understand this.

Rejection reason:

This is a resubmission of a previously rejected submission. Resubmitting without making the required changes or any improvements is not considered acceptable use of the Envato marketplaces and repeated attempts may result in a temporary or permanent suspension of authorship.

If this item was previously soft-rejected, please resubmit your updated files by updating the item directly. If this item was previously hard-rejected, it must be changed as required in the initial review or significantly improved such that it qualifies as a new item.

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