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Designed2 says

Hi,

Just a quick post and request for feedback on the following one page design.

If anybody has any suggestions which could make this design better please let me know.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/56087/Slash/slash.jpg
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aegraphics says

Hello! Nice concept with circles. But i think it is too simple for psd category. Details, details and details again :)

Good luck!

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Designed2 says

Thanks Aegraphics

I’ve submitted the design after some amends and got a hard rejection. :(

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/56087/Slash/slash-a.jpg http://dl.dropbox.com/u/56087/Slash/slash-d.jpg

Any feedback or suggestions will be welcome.

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MouseOnLeaf says

Hi Designed2,

its really hard to get NOT rejected at the PSD category (i know what I’m talking about…) ;)

Nice idea indeed. But like aegraphics wrote: It’s simple to simple. ;) Details are missing and envato don’t like justified text. Never ever.

cheers and good luck!

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Designed2 says

Thanks Ssievert,

I know what you mean about it being simple but thats the look / feel I want to achieve.

Regarding the details if you could point out a couple of issues i’d appreciate it.

Also the text isn’t justified ;)

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MouseOnLeaf says

Sorry, centered, not justify. They dont like centered. :)

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