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guiwidgets says

Hi,

I don’t what is happening in here ‘now-a-days’. Without any reason simply they are rejecting designs. Previously reviewers will write some reasons for rejection. But now they say “NO MINIMUM QUALITY ” just like that. Also attaching a useless link like http://themeforest.net/support?sso. I know this is support.envato.com. Worst thing is the rejecting people are unable to send a right link.

Ok will come to the point. Have look at my design : http://www.guiwidgets.com/demo/Envato/landing-pages/index-ver-1.0.html

Doesn’t have minimum quality?

I want to submit again so, please Let me know your opinion to improve this. If you feel this is not a right design for TF, I will start a new one. Already I have spent 10 days.

Feedback really really appreciated.

Thanks, Ram.

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BenSheppard says
You’ll find that 10 days on a template is nothing.

It does look extremal old fashioned, and has little to non minimum quality.

  • The typography is horrible, you haven’t even attempted anything
  • The submit form looks more like a bunch of ugly buttons
  • Make the blue more subtle
  • Spacing issues throughout
  • Landy Ver 2.0 will be responsive?... Why not now, it’s a selling point.
  • The picture boxes just look out of place
  • The blog section, and rest of the template looks rushed
  • The border around the testimonial section looks awful
  • Underneath the testimonial looks good, try and stick to that theme.
  • You have 3 different styles of buttons…
  • Some more random pictures with spacing issues
  • A twitter widget thrown in for the sake of it
  • Guitar and exercise? What are you actually making a landing page for?
  • 100% commented code? You don’t want your users edditing lines of you code you want them to change say a JavaScript variable from “var color = red” to “var color = green” and change your whole template
  • it’s not a clean style of design.
  • The step by step process looks very out of place
  • More rushed and out of places images and elements…


The entire template looks like you’ve thrown things together in a hope someone will see it and think, look how much I’m getting for my money! :O
They wont.
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BenSheppard says

Also, post in Item Discussion, read the Forum Rules

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guiwidgets says

Thanks for your opinion Ben. I am considering your bunch of points seriously.

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trendyWebStar says

I think You need to work much more to make something ready for themeforest. First thing that caught my eyes is very bad typography and footer. :)

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guiwidgets says

Sure Webstar, will concentrate more on typo. Thanks.

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virtuti says

Sure Webstar, will concentrate more on typo. Thanks.

Do not concentrate on typo, concentrate on typography:)))

I think you need to change colours–this blue is not good. And too many icons + all of them are of different styling. Same with buttons–try to keep one style.

I also find the page to be too long and overfilled with content. If you need such solid amount of content per page you will need to think over how to organise it better.

Main thing either is design itself–it requires mind and heart, putting together a few separate pieces is just not enough.

Wish you good luck in further work!

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guiwidgets says

Thank you virtuti, I will consider these suggestions in my next design.

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