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mrjasmin says

Hi ! I need some opinions on my new template..

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Thanks

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mrjasmin says

Here is the livepreview

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JeffreyWay says

I like it; but it needs to offer something unique—as compared to what we’re currently offering in that category.

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mrjasmin says
I like it; but it needs to offer something unique—as compared to what we’re currently offering in that category.

Hi ! I think that it´s pretty unique compared to the two others but I will try and figure out something that I can add to it. Maybe a working contact form ?

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hiddenpearls says

My 404 template got rejected too by Jeffrey.

here is its live preview http://whizbangsolutions.com/ourwork/404/404.html

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hiddenpearls says
I like it; but it needs to offer something unique—as compared to what we’re currently offering in that category.

Hi ! I think that it´s pretty unique compared to the two others but I will try and figure out something that I can add to it. Maybe a working contact form ?

Yes, may a contact form is much better. but reviewer must give us suggestions so we could add stuff.

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PixelBin says

Uhm, looks VERY similar to the first construction page. Honestly, do you not have any inspiration and ideas of your own? Why are all your works so similar to other popular works? Shape up man. Quit trying to steal other people’s success.

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mrjasmin says
Uhm, looks VERY similar to the first construction page. Honestly, do you not have any inspiration and ideas of your own? Why are all your works so similar to other popular works? Shape up man. Quit trying to steal other people’s success.

Are you kidding me ? This is MY own design and I am not stealing. Look at them again and compare, the design is not even close to be similar. Just because one person is using a slider does that mean that nobody else can ? Im really tired of this stupid accusations coming from you.

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mrjasmin says
I like it; but it needs to offer something unique—as compared to what we’re currently offering in that category.

Hi ! If I make 5 color schemes, is it good than ?

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reidknorr says

Honestly no offense but your idea/concept looks very similar to the other two already up. Try to think of something new and creative. Who knows what you might be able to come up with!

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