Both your previous template and this new one are really on the same level. They both look fairly nice and are neatly laid out – but as others have said they’re just a little dull.
You need to make the template stand out from all the other templates being sold on TF. To do this try incorporating something that we haven’t seen before. This doesn’t need to be something major. For example have a running theme through the template that is unique to you, such as a flashy logo, the style of which could also be adopted by the sub headings.