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mrjasmin says

Hi ! Im working on a new wordpress theme and I wonder what you think about it.

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ponjoh says

I’m not at all fond of this one to be completely honest :P

  • Firstly, the drop shadows are way too prominent; they should be subtle.
  • A design should be consistent, and the style and colour of that search bar doesn’t fit the rest of the design at all.
  • The colour scheme simply does not please the eye. Not mine, at least. I can’t really put it in words and explain how that can be “improved”. Maybe you could use kuler to find a good looking colour scheme.

Oh, and don’t call it Gamepress. There’s already a theme here on TF with that name ;)

I hope I helped, and good luck! :)

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mrjasmin says

Is it better now ?

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_rohan says
Is it better now ?

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Its better, but I have a few suggestions:

Don’t use “ยป” for the headings. Use a better font. Perhaps the Lucida family or something Put more gaps between posts.

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mrjasmin says

Is it better now ?

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Bebel says

I think this one looks much better than the first image. Here are my suggestions:

  • Use a bolder font for the logo and move the shadow to the bottom (also make the shadow closer to the logo)
  • as dracano said: get rid of all ”>>”
  • try some other backgrounds – maybe a carbon background or so?!

I hope this helps a bit :)

good luck!

Cheers

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mrjasmin says
I think this one looks much better than the first image. Here are my suggestions:
  • Use a bolder font for the logo and move the shadow to the bottom (also make the shadow closer to the logo)
  • as dracano said: get rid of all ”>>”
  • try some other backgrounds – maybe a carbon background or so?!

I hope this helps a bit :)

good luck!

Cheers

Thanks for the suggestions.

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mrjasmin says

Improved :

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mrjasmin says

Here is the single page ( not finished ).

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Bebel says

Hey

Logo looks much better now!

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