Opinion: Template Rejected

Hello Guys, I sent my first template for the TF, however was rejected with the following reasons:

Interesting layout, but, the design quality and aesthetic quality are not ready for ThemeForest.

The visual hierarchy is weak, the content are is messy, the design is lack of details.

There are a few inconsistent spacing/padding as well as alignment issues throughout the design. I’d like you to go over it with a fine toothed comb and weed out these basic design issues.

I’ve already improved some things, like the content, put more effects and others…

You can see the template in the link: DEMO

What can I improve?

Can anyone help me?

there’s a lot to improve, be consistent on your spacing, add more line-height, etc.

Thanks a lot! I’ll work on it. What else can I improve? Someone?

Typography and Subject. Those are two things that I think need to be improved.