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BlackStormChaser says

Hi Friends.

I need your opinion on my latest project, I have worked hard for this project but because of quality reasons, it was rejected. As i want to improve this project, I need your suggestions. Please guide me. Below is the link.

http://youtu.be/njQ0RuXICv4

Warm Regards. Tj

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Creattive says

Hi, I cannot face anything too obvious here, I don’t like the overall timing, though. It can be a bit faster and more dynamic, I guess. The typeface is not so nice, in my opinion.

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Thank You Sir.

Timing means, Is it slow or not going with the music. What i felt after it was rejected is maybe the transitions are simpler and are same.

Thanks Tj

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Creattive says

I’m not very good in pointing out what’s wrong, so I hope some other authors will answer, too.

I was not referring to the music. But for example, at 0:40 the text writing on is too slow for me. The banners should already have the text written on as they appear so you don’t have to wait till you can read it.

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Thanks a Lot, You are right, Here i was confused, i have done unnecessary animation and out animations.

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GhosTeam says

As Creattive said, I think the main problem is it’s not dynamic enough. Try blend the animations and make them faster / react to one another.
Another example, in some cases you used the “Vegas” effect and rotated it – which is good, and in some cases it’s not moving at all..
I would change the colors as well..maybe something bright in the background?

Some basic design concepts are missing here: Another example at 01:04 – the placeholders & title should be centered. Now there is a blank space above it and it looks unprofessional…

I don’t know a lot about typography but I hope I helped :)

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BlackStormChaser says

Thanks a lot Ghos Team sir, One more thing i wanna ask, Is the the concept of script, good for the project. or we should use the text like ” this place is for this”. etc.

Best wishes, Tj

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GhosTeam says

The script is great, no need to overthink this…be focused on the animation :)

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BlackStormChaser says

Thanks Sir, I have concluded the points..

Improvise Timing Faster & Dynamic Animation Improve Typeface Animation should react to one Another Improve background Focus on the Animation

My next project will include all of this written above.

Thanks for your Time and suggestions. Best Wishes Tj

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