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ceosDesigns
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Hey there folks,

can you give me some feedback on my rejected coming soon page?

Of course rejection was very generic with no explanation whatsoever. I don’t consider that generic text that they sent as explanation.

Here’s the link: http://ceosdesigns.sk/emerald/

Thanks in advance for your comments and advice.

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ceosDesigns
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Any opinion and/or advice would be much appreciated. Thanks :)

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charlie4282
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Personally I find the green a bit harsh on the eyes and would loose the black space above and below the image. Its generally quite nice but needs something stand out and different to it to set it apart. Good luck

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ceosDesigns
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Personally I find the green a bit harsh on the eyes and would loose the black space above and below the image. Its generally quite nice but needs something stand out and different to it to set it apart. Good luck

I was thinking about adding color options anyway, so I guess I can create different color schemes, so everyone can find their favourite. I just used green because of the name – Emerald, right? :) I will try to lose those dark header and footer areas. Thank you for valuable input.

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charlie4282
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I get why just think its a little harsh. I really think you need to add something different too. Right now its perfectly nice but too generic and simple for the marketplace to set itself apart. Good luck

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ceosDesigns
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I get why just think its a little harsh. I really think you need to add something different too. Right now its perfectly nice but too generic and simple for the marketplace to set itself apart. Good luck

Thank you :) I will work to improve myself.

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