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kevinsturf says

Ok this rejected twice due to typographical issues.

the first time, the reviewer said:

“Overall template typography needs additional refinements and improvements. The headlines/titles need some adjustments in size and contrast to help the element focus of the template and guide visitors through the content. The general content typography also needs some improvements in contrast. Aside from the typography the template looks like it’s about ready.”

Second time:

“The overall typography has not been improved enough since the last review. You will need to work on element focus using typography as well as the contrast of the different styles of typography.”

I really dont know what else to do, I increased the headers to show more focus to a section and guide visitors through the site well enough but It got rejected again du to second review comment above.

check the site out please and let me know how to go about making the typography better as stated by the reviewer.

http://taintedarts.com/coderslibrary/

thanks guys

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YA says

Nice template. Here’s my suggestions:

Home page: I would not make the text under welcome and latest headings white (as the color of headings), instead try something less contrast.

About page: Get to know… heading needs to be bigger in the size than Read all about us heading. I think that this page uses quite a lot lorem ipsum and it spans too wide. (Also, I would not make the main text white)

For other pages – try to fix the page name heading size.

Hope you find it useful! Good luck!

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kevinsturf says
Nice template. Here’s my suggestions:

Home page: I would not make the text under welcome and latest headings white (as the color of headings), instead try something less contrast.

About page: Get to know… heading needs to be bigger in the size than Read all about us heading. I think that this page uses quite a lot lorem ipsum and it spans too wide. (Also, I would not make the main text white)

For other pages – try to fix the page name heading size.

Hope you find it useful! Good luck!

check it out, dont know if this made it better

http://taintedarts.com/coderslibrary/

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YA says

I would make tagline even bigger. I think the site looks better now.

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kevinsturf says
I would make tagline even bigger. I think the site looks better now.

bigger??isn’t it big enough, o well i’ll try it and see

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