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Pentagon says

This Is My First Template – Penta Psd Theme – Is It Good ? And What I Must Do To Accept This Template ? I’m Waiting Your Comments.

http://h.imagehost.org/0508/Orion_copy.jpg

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QwibbleDesigns says

I can see you’ve used DDStudio’s Orion theme as a starting point, which is fine, because only the typography is recognisable, but my starting thoughts for you are,

Your header and slider are too thin, and your two content columns are far far too wide. Your side content should be 960px wide, normally with some padding, making it normally around 940px.

You’ve missed out a logo, which is pretty much required.

The border around your slider isnt the same width on all sides. This sort of pixel perfections is something you need.

Your buttons are unreadable, they need a lot of work. I think you’ve gone overboard with the styles on the text.

Your footer slider needs a title. I havent a clue what its for. The reflection on them is also far too strong. Have the reflection maybe 30px tall, and have it fade out the further it is from the image.

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Pentagon says
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PixelBin says

Well to answer your questions, no, it is not good. And what do you need to get this accepted? Well, how about not copy other authors’ work by opening up their FREELY distributed PSD files and being too retarded to even call the file differently from the original.

You people disgust me.

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DDStudios says

Oh my god. To all TF community, I want to apologize first for all the bad word I will use.

Let me ask you a question. What the [cheese] is wrong with you?

First of all … your picture is named Orion_copy.jpg .. this is a REALLY bad start man.

Second, look at this picture:

You even took the SAME lorem ipsum .. same title, same icons.

Im glad you found my blog where I give free psd and you should use them to know how designer work, not to COPY them and come here ask about your design skills.

And what about the freaking width of the theme, do you design for HD tv? 16:9 ?

Inspiring is ok, stealing is bad. At least change the name of your file when you try to copy someone lol.

Ok I guess I wasn’t that rude after all.

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QwibbleDesigns says

Its fair enough Dany. When I saw it, I hadn’t noticed that the content layout was exactly the same as well. I’d thought it had at least been moved.

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VisualSharing says
First of all … your picture is named Orion_copy.jpg .. this is a REALLY bad start man.

Hahaha… this is EPIC FAIL in so many ways ! :D

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CreatingDrew says

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