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Farhangdarzi says

I am working on This Theme and would appreciate any views, comments and suggestions before I finalize it.

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trendyWebStar says

Honestly I’m not sure in which category you’re planning to submit it, but i think it need more work. I would suggest working on your header & footer more, i don’t think it would get approved in templates section, and not close enough to get approved in PSD section.

That’s just my 2c. :)

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AfterLabs says

Hey there Farhangdarzi,

I would agree with @trendyWebStar the Header and Footer needs some work. But i would also suggest Font & Spacing.

Hope that helps.

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joeBanana says

I agree too, but also have to say that you are on a good path. And not try to tweak a header, rethink it, design it from different point of view and maybe remove bold styles from titles. After all, I like it.

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Farhangdarzi says

Hi thanks for your opinions, any other ideas?

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dmsumon says

You have to go a long way. It is still very far my friend. Get more creativity and create a good one. Always be clever in color choice. Thank you :)

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