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shiva112
says

Hey all

I was here a time ago also but you can all read how that went!

Ik just want to say i have everything removed that i look’d off other designs. So everything is my own now, so now ik want some feedback :p

http://www.shivatraanman.eu/devine

Thanks all

Shiva Traanman

P.S. Sorry for my bad english i live in the netherlands and my English isn’t so good

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ThemeProvince
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If your looking to sell it here or anywhere you have a long way to go.

Look at some of the top authors to see whats required.

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shiva112
says

please give me some pointers, Whats wrong and whats good?

Thanks

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ThemeProvince
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please give me some pointers, Whats wrong and whats good? Thanks

You have a long way to go. :)

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wpCanyonThemes
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Design

Colors are wrong, paddings are wrong, margins are wrong, typography is wrong, spacing is wrong.

Coding

Don’t use SiteGrinder. Learn coding, or learn design and pay someone to code your designs.

You can’t just install photoshop put a few colored rectangles, some images and some text, fire up SiteGrinder and have a website. If it was that easy neither designers nor developers would exist.

So, go read tutorials, practice, practice, practice and in few years come back and post a decent design we can talk about.

Sorry if i’m a bit harsh, but i really don’t like when someone thinks designer’s or developer’s job is easy and all you need is pirated PhotoShop and SiteGrinder to start making awesome websites.

And this is themeforest forum, you can only show designs/templates/themes that you’re planning on selling here.

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Monkify
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Seriously? I kind of think this is a joke or something. You take Bluz’s free template and modify it in the slightest bit and then ask for comments on it. Then you make some more slight changes to it and ask for more comments.

I wouldn’t even consider this a design, given the fact that there’s no purpose to it. To design something is to create with purpose. You just took the basic structure of a template (headline, content, footer, headlines, spacing) and just added a bunch of random Lorem Ipsum content to it.

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ewizz
says

design, typography, user experience&usability, flow, colors…are amazing in this template ! where did you made it ? on nintendo ? i am not designer, but i can make something this like on calculator :D

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dejans7
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Lol seriously, are you just trying to be a:

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wpCanyonThemes
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I don’t think he’ll be coming back any time soon.

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webdesigndeluxe
says

Maybe I’m not seeing it but how does this look remotely close to Bluz’s free theme?

EDIT : Sorry, with a second look, this looks absolutely nothing like Bluz’s design, with the footer an exception. C’mon guys, we all were where he is now, I don’t think we appreciated everyone being a harda$$ to us when all we wanted was some constructive criticism. I think some people’s replies to these types of threads are just absurd. We all are a community. Even if a theme is incredibly far from ThemeForest standards, the least we could do is be respectful and kindly explain what he can do to improve his design skills. Anyways, just my 2 cents.

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