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JulianoAuditore says

Recently I submited a flyer for Graphic River, and got a soft reject from the reviewer :

“This is an interesting concept, but the file design needs a little tweaking, consider how to push the file design to something a little more refined. Consider the hierarchy, the leading, alignment, typeface selection and how to push the file.”

Here’s the design: http://3.s3.envato.com/files/41996821/Image%20Preview%20590x1675.jpg

Please share your thoughts on how I can get the design approved.

Regards,

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harmonikas996 says

Recently I submited a flyer for Graphic River, and got a soft reject from the reviewer :

“This is an interesting concept, but the file design needs a little tweaking, consider how to push the file design to something a little more refined. Consider the hierarchy, the leading, alignment, typeface selection and how to push the file.”

Here’s the design: http://3.s3.envato.com/files/41996821/Image%20Preview%20590x1675.jpg

Please share your thoughts on how I can get the design approved.

Regards,

Sorry about that, but design is really to basic. Try to use better font, better pictures, and avoid boxes like that. :) That’s like metro style, and that’s not for party.

Best regards!

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JulianoAuditore says

Thanks ;)

Any suggestions on how to improve the design ? Since its a soft reject, i guess not everything is lost.

Regards

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