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polypic says

please preview and tell me what i have done wronge
i have done a photo album with mixed three styles
for different life stages

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customized with expression for every style

Hard rejected
(those styles are so different that it looks inconsistent.)

ok i cleaned the project and make just one the old grunge style

ScreenShots :

another hard reject
(minimum design, animation, and technical requirements. )

what i`m missing here

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doru says

the second version is better but the reject message specify animation,

show us the project video preview else we can’t help you.

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polypic says

the second version is better but the reject message specify animation, show us the project video preview else we can’t help you.
sorry i uploaded the preview
http://youtu.be/uo0S6zKQ1Us
thank you for your reply
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doru says

yes, the animation is not consistent, in certain areas is fluid as it should be, but in other is just too rapid, with no ease on start and stop. this should be the first area to fix.

the second area you need to work on are colors and textures. make colors more warm and nice, this pale green gray is ugly. also get rid of the shadow texture under the photo, it looks bad. you should replace it with a better shadow or if you really want to put there a texture make sure you create some variations.

elements on the background also have problems, sometime they are animated other no so much and in most case have the same fluid problem I’ve already mentioned.

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polypic says

thank you doru do you mean the camera movement too ???

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doru says

thank you doru do you mean the camera movement too ???

yes, that’s the main problem

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STproduction says

Very Nice Work! :)

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