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ashobiz says

Before 3 days i submitted my first template (1st design http://i.imgur.com/Y82O4.png) and it got rejected… Now i completely redesigned my template (2nd design http://i.imgur.com/stz7E.jpg)... I am very new to themeforest so i don’t know much about reviewing process… so please give some comments about my new design…

Thank you

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PressLayer says

The concept is not bad but you should work with color, it’s very ugly (sorry!). Also your design make me anoying with many text.

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ashobiz says

Hi, Thanks for your suggesstions…

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alwintswi says

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alwintswi says

I like the lay-out, but the appearance looks 90s, unattractive colors ec. the green is even kind of aggressive. Also I would choose modern fonts etc. Again, the layout itself is OK, it just need some ‘maturing’.

Cheers ;)

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ashobiz says

Thanks for your suggestions… i will work on colors…

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Anps says

Yes very oldish, and you should work abit on typo

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ashobiz says

Thank you Anps…

I will work on typography… What about layout is it ok??

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Anps says

The green color’s gotta go

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