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ashobiz says

Hi to all,

Before 5 days i submitted my first design but it got rejected… After some redesigning i submitted again (http://responsivewebinc.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/08/1.png) ... Again it got rejected saying “unique design, features, options….......”... So i dropped that template and started working on new template…

I partially finished this design… please take a look and let me know what you think…

http://responsivewebinc.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/08/11.png

Thank you

Ashok

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PixFee says

Very nice template, you cant try to change the background image to a brighter one and add some social buttons in the right of the footer

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IulianN says

Sorry man, but your design dont have nothing special, be more unique, come with something new, something that will make you smile, when you’ll look at your design :) good luck !

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ashobiz says

Thanks for all your valuable feedback… I just started this today and i will improve this…

Thank you…

Ashok

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ashobiz says

Thanks for all your valuable feedback… I just started this today and i will improve this…

Thank you…

Ashok

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wickedpixel says

Nobody designs something in a day. Max you can have in a day is an idea. :P

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ashobiz says

NO, i won’t design a full site in a day… it will take more than 4 days to design a single page…

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mccloud55 says

The template looks kind of redundant and the blue dots have to go…they distract from your main theme which is the car?

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digitalscience says

Nice colors but needs more “pop”

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