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4GraFx says

Hi

I’m working on a new template and before keep building the other pages i was looking for some feedbacks.

So, for the guys who have some time to spare can you take a look at this and tell me what you think?

Home Page Preview

http://postimage.org/image/2nxcaw878/

I would be very grateful for any feedback

Thank you

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Smartik says

I like it. Use 12px font-size and 1.6 em line-height for paragraphs ;)

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al_m473 says

footer at the top of the code?

deprecated HTML tags, such as center?

tables used for layout?

some real no-nos if you want to sell it on TF

al

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4GraFx says

Thx Smartik… About the 12px i don’t think it will work. I’m afraid that will make the font unreadable but i will give it a try.

Thx al_m473 for the reply. I was looking for a feedback on the “Design chapter” :).

As for the “Coding chapter”...this will be build with 960 Grid System for the HTML template and Gantry Framework for the WP theme if it will get accepted.

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Pixelworkshop says

@al_m473 you looked at the source code but it’s just a screenshot :)

Otherwise it’s a nice design ! The line-height could be increased as suggested, also the 3 parts of the footer use different line-heights, and gives the feeling that the footer typography doesn’t fit in the overall layout. Good luck !

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MelforDMThemes says
Pixelworkshop said
@al_m473 you looked at the source code but it’s just a screenshot :)

Rofl how fail, that’s why buyers shouldn’t participate in template judgements :)

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UniquePixelWeb says

wow it’s got accepted! congratulation 4GraFx

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4GraFx says

thank you tultul…got some modification since this post was open :)

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