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TkayGraphics says

A a glance of my Portfolio template [ PSD ] I have sent it to be reviewed by themeforest staff.

http://i50.tinypic.com/hs9rbl.jpg

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snaz3d says

The text is way tooooooooooo big!

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Ivor Reviewer says

I can read the future – this design will be rejected :P

Kidding :) – that need a lot of improvements mate.

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adam_robinson says

this has to be a joke seriously.

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kevinsturf says

I dont mean to sound bad here but I have to tell ya, that ain’t gonna get accepted as the way it is now. If you take a look ate some psds already here, you’ll see the standards required to get accepted into the PSD category.

You need A LOT of improvements, first with typography and work from there.

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duane_ashworth says

That really needs a lot of work , I’d say really the colors are the only thing going for it , Introduce some whitespace and yea, tone those titles down a lot, add some sections and some dummy text so that someone who would want to buy it has an idea of what the website would actually look like when coded.

Theres really not much interest in it , tone the menu down and make sure that you work out what people are going to focus on.

I don’t think this will be accepted , you really need to look more at what is currently for sale and focus on coming up to that standard.

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DDStudios says

Good thing you put some watermark .. I would have totally stole it :)

Sorry I couldn’t not say it :)

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TkayGraphics says

Thank you guys , it was m first rubish template.

I’m making a new one.

Any idea’s what improments i can make?

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finsta2 says

Don’t use size 72+ text

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TkayGraphics says

Guys what about :

http://i50.tinypic.com/330hfef.jpg

I’m going to add colour lator.

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