psd rejected - please give advice

Hi all , I am new to TF. I’ve been working on the design I wanted to upload to psd category but it got rejected.I did 7 pages and it took my a lot of time so really dissapointed..

The theme itself was suppose to have that rugged/masculine feeling but I suppose it’s all about keeping it clean.

I’d would love to get some guidance and advice from senior members.

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Regards