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crozer says

I honestly thought it was a good design, and yet, it got rejected. I guess my criteria is way below kailoon’s.

In any case, I’d really appreciate if you could give me some advice on improving this template overall. I’d appreciate it very much.

Some screens:
http://i50.tinypic.com/oaxeo8.jpg
http://i47.tinypic.com/orm3q8.jpg
http://i50.tinypic.com/hs9i1j.jpg

Thank you in advance.
Chris

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VisualSharing says

Something I noticed is that it needs more whitespace (inner pages). Plus, I think it would be nice to include preview of some hover states.

I also think the theme needs to offer more options, especially on the main page and footer (the last is almost missing).

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crozer says
Something I noticed is that it needs more whitespace (inner pages). Plus, I think it would be nice to include preview of some hover states. I also think the theme needs to offer more options, especially on the main page and footer (the last is almost missing).

What do you mean with inner pages? I wanted to make a flat-page-design.
Also, there is a Hover state on the Blog-link (which should be very ‘delicate’ in terms of design).

I am sorry, I also didn’t understand what you meant with “the last is almsot missing” regarding to more options on the main page and footer – could you explain it a bit better to me?

Thank you very much for your feedback, I really appreciate it!
Still, is it that bad to get rejected? I mean, it is a design, not a working HTML site.

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