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toxdesignro says

Hi everyone i am trying for a long time to get in the PSD category and my latest work is here(all the pages):


Homepage
Homepage(no slider)
Services
About us
Shortcodes
Portofolio(1 item)
Portofolio(2 items)
Portofolio(3 items)
Portofolio(4 items)
Portofolio(Filterable)
Blogpage
Blogpage(Sidebaron the left)
Blogpage(Layout2)
Blog entry
Blog entry(Layout 2)
Contact

The preivew files with the 960 grid overlay can be found here:http://studentfii.ro/deepclean/

Please give me some feedback about everything: fonts, layout, positioning etc.

Thank you!

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BenSheppard says

I don’t like the left and right arrows on the slider and I find the “wood” background to be quite off putting, just my opinion but I’d suggest another background!

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toxdesignro says

This template has good start, but it’s not unique enough and very simple to be approved under PSD category. Try to work more on padding, margin. Typography need improvements too. There is not something to tell you, move here or change this. You need to work more, and I’m sure you can do better.

Thanks for the feedback! I will work more!

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toxdesignro says

I don’t like the left and right arrows on the slider and I find the “wood” background to be quite off putting, just my opinion but I’d suggest another background!

Thanks for the opinion, but i will stick with the wooden background!

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