PSD Template - Restaurant - Please review for me

Hi guys. I’ve made the first homepage of Restaurant in PSD template. Please review for me, Is it good enough to sell on TF? What should I improve it?

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You should spend more time working on typography.
Slider controller look unnatural
You would also need to make some sub-pages to it, but it’s a good start I think

This is nice, all you need to do is as sunlifter sad you need to work on your typo and spacing, especially spacing

Looks like an already approved theme.

Thanks guys, will work on it.