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aron66 says

I made a project and just finished a hour ago. I think its looking cool, and clean. Review and rate it!

http://youtu.be/1Zg_xlH-1JI

Is it ready for VH or i need to change something? Thanks so much!

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Farley_Design says

Reflections aren’t moving, that’s the major issue. It could use more subtle details, looks pretty generic and it’ll probably get rejected if it stays like this. Besides reviewers tend to reject these logo reveals lately and it must really stand out to be accepted. “Shockwave” looks great, maybe you could power it up a bit :)

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aron66 says

Ohh, At the final scene i didnt made reflection follow the logo. Also ill do a better shockwave, and maybe remake the second scene with new camera moves. Thanks for help!!

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aron66 says

I did an update on the project! Camera move changed, some CC added, Wave got upgrade too!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=86HE5kZj2U8
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jvirgos says

I believe that the main problem is that the logo reveals are lately increasing their own level one step forward and reviewers must be extrict with them. You must offer something new about there is already in VH. I am not reviewer of course but i belive that this item will be probabily rejected not for poor quality but no new concept design.

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benandaim says

I believe that the main problem is that the logo reveals are lately increasing their own level one step forward and reviewers must be extrict with them. You must offer something new about there is already in VH. I am not reviewer of course but i belive that this item will be probabily rejected not for poor quality but no new concept design.

I tend to agree here, you’ve done a nice job. It’s just that there’s a billion of these on VH right now.

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InlifeThrill says

Yes, there so many files that look alike.

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happycreative says

Maybe change the background to something completely different – like to deep space, or between clouds or in a desert somewehere… because the logo reveals that look similiar all use the ‘generic’ background like this one uses. And maybe its just me, but because the logo is floating I would lose the reflections.

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aron66 says

Thanks for help guys, also i did a new background. How it looks?

Click to zoom.

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aron66 says

Also did another little upgrade. Which one looks better? The previous one or this?

Click to zoom again. Thanks for support me guys!

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