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aron66
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I made a project and just finished a hour ago. I think its looking cool, and clean. Review and rate it!

http://youtu.be/1Zg_xlH-1JI

Is it ready for VH or i need to change something? Thanks so much!

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Farley_Design
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Reflections aren’t moving, that’s the major issue. It could use more subtle details, looks pretty generic and it’ll probably get rejected if it stays like this. Besides reviewers tend to reject these logo reveals lately and it must really stand out to be accepted. “Shockwave” looks great, maybe you could power it up a bit :)

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aron66
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Ohh, At the final scene i didnt made reflection follow the logo. Also ill do a better shockwave, and maybe remake the second scene with new camera moves. Thanks for help!!

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aron66
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I did an update on the project! Camera move changed, some CC added, Wave got upgrade too!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=86HE5kZj2U8
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jvirgos
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I believe that the main problem is that the logo reveals are lately increasing their own level one step forward and reviewers must be extrict with them. You must offer something new about there is already in VH. I am not reviewer of course but i belive that this item will be probabily rejected not for poor quality but no new concept design.

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benandaim
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I believe that the main problem is that the logo reveals are lately increasing their own level one step forward and reviewers must be extrict with them. You must offer something new about there is already in VH. I am not reviewer of course but i belive that this item will be probabily rejected not for poor quality but no new concept design.

I tend to agree here, you’ve done a nice job. It’s just that there’s a billion of these on VH right now.

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InlifeThrill
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Yes, there so many files that look alike.

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happycreative
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Maybe change the background to something completely different – like to deep space, or between clouds or in a desert somewehere… because the logo reveals that look similiar all use the ‘generic’ background like this one uses. And maybe its just me, but because the logo is floating I would lose the reflections.

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aron66
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Thanks for help guys, also i did a new background. How it looks?

Click to zoom.

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aron66
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Also did another little upgrade. Which one looks better? The previous one or this?

Click to zoom again. Thanks for support me guys!

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