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I try more times to improve this design (it is psd for I want be sure to approved before convert to wordpress version) but the reviewer rejected it again without any detailed reason.

The message is like as always: The overall quality of your submission does not meet our aesthetic and technical requirements and will need to be improved before being resubmitted. Unfortunately we’re not able to provide more specific feedback for your submission at this time.

https://redpen.io/fpw8q1

I try to improve this based on some feedback from forum but it is rejected again, If you have any Idea or suggestion please give me another feedback.

Thanks

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Dzinc
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This thread is now in › Item Discussion

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FlatKing
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It looks rather outdated

I’ll try and give you as much advice as possible – I’m currently going through a soft rejection spree and it’s killing me!

It just seems a very mix mash of different elements thrown together. Try and make a UI kit of what you want to use, work on the typography then start esembling a file
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It looks rather outdated

I’ll try and give you as much advice as possible – I’m currently going through a soft rejection spree and it’s killing me!

It just seems a very mix mash of different elements thrown together. Try and make a UI kit of what you want to use, work on the typography then start esembling a file

thank you, I will consider them on the next improvement.

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nothings else? :S

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LoveThemes
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It’s just not good enough.

This style has been done a LOT lately and done much better than yours, it’s that simple.

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It’s just not good enough. This style has been done a LOT lately and done much better than yours, it’s that simple.

Hi, thanks but I try to improve my theme by your previous suggestion for my theme here

http://themeforest.net/forums/thread/hard-work-without-any-result-/123283?page=1
https://redpen.io/edb53z

means you say, I do not continue this design?

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Your changes aren’t significant enough, especially as this style has been done to death.

I’d move away from this style and come up with something more unique.

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Your changes aren’t significant enough, especially as this style has been done to death. I’d move away from this style and come up with something more unique.

Thanks but I want now my changes in typography was correct in your mind, I try to fix line height, weight, color,.... to create better consistancy and remove Icons and line from headings

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I’ve told you what I think is wrong with it, I’m not here to mentor you and tell you exactly what to do step by step, that is your job.

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