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mabuc
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can anybody help me what am I doing wrong on this theme? here are some points need to change..

1. Typography still need work. Titles and important areas of text don’t stand out.

2. The design lacks meaningful details. Worse, it’s not really consistent with it. Some areas have lots of details, while some do not.

3. The header feels like something from last decade. The color combination and typography are the main culprits.

4. The individual inner pages need a bit more imagination. You don’t need to follow what everyone is doing. You should try something different here.

5. Use of white space is still problematic.

here’s the link: http://goo.gl/8ZBax

regards,

mabuc

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web_gab
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sorry. didn’t see the link :)

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mabuc
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thanks.. I posted it here because “Item Discussion” section seems not visible in our sidebar (active threads box).. it is visible only when you click Item Discussion menu.. link are provided in my first post

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sevenspark
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Moved to Item Discussion.

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