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dijihane says

Youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fp-6Lim-wMI

Vimeo: https://vimeo.com/73535080

Reviewer did not mention about any rejection reason(except the automatic message) so I need your opinions.

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StenioArt says

I liked! try to animate the logo in some way, put textures .. Let’s hope someone else can advise something :)

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stormland says

My suggestion is to change the end .

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StrokeVorkz says

Logo is there all the time, and No curiosity is been developed to introduce Logo,

Scene is too busy from the start to end with more elements and my focus is not on the Logo, which is supposed to be the Main element

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dijihane says

Logo is there all the time, and No curiosity is been developed to introduce Logo, Scene is too busy from the start to end with more elements and my focus is not on the Logo, which is supposed to be the Main element

I agree with you the bigest problem of the project is what you say

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sharegokul says

Your work is Good :) But there so logo reveals are here.So do Different also in as simple.Then wil get approve :)

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DarkLand says

In my view.
Change the logo.
Reduce the size(thickness) and opacity of elements.

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