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visztpeter
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Hi!

I make a html template, but i got rejected, with this explanation:

“This template has a nice concept going but will need many improvements in typography, visual hierarchy, layout and general aesthetics”

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What you guys think? Any suggestions?

Thanks

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CreativeMilk
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Use a line height(like 20px) and ad more elements to the theme (like inputfields, headings, colors, text decorations, and so on) ad a contact form(a working one will help sell) and try to fill all pages.

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visztpeter
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Thanks for the reply!

So, i make a contact form, success/error/notice message, vertical content slider, about us page, some typography class(bold, small, underline, italic), and line-height is 20px, and i make a simple 4 column grid layout

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CreativeMilk
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Nice ;) well that should get your theme approved ;)

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visztpeter
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Thanks, i make some changes tomorrow, like some hover effect, headers, checkout pages, and i hope, i get approved:)

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HarveyDesign
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Blue Inc has a very similar site, maybe you could get some ideas

http://www.blueinc.co.uk/

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visztpeter
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Thanks, i gonna see it

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Ivor
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Damn! this is very cool! I hope they accept the template.!

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visztpeter
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“This template has a nice concept going but will need many improvements in typography, visual hierarchy, layout and general aesthetics.”

Again:)

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visztpeter
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Now i added a hover effect to the slider, and the products, and i add a little gradient to the bg, but i think i need more changes:)

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