Rejected template, please help

Hi guys,

can you, please, provide some feedback on my new (rejected) theme?

some of the pages:

Homepage

About

Portfolio

message given by the reviewer: “You’re competing with the hundreds of other minimalist designs on TF. Whether a design is approved is based on how it compares, and looks, to the other submissions here. And as a general rule, it’s much harder to get a design approved now than in the past due to sheer proliferation.

You’re also going to have to get by with a limited set of variables. Ergo, you need to make more efficient, more effective use of them to get the same results. As I keep mentioning, white space and typography are pretty much what make a minimalist design and you need more work on these aspects.”

Personally i think it’s a great design, but sadly this kind of design is not appreciated in PSD section of themeforest.

As the reviewer mentioned, you need to use the space better play around with different fonts and fonts sizes and more spacing.

By themeforest standards the heading is dull.

All together you need more elements.

As i sad i dig it but it just doesn’t pass like this in psd section.

Hope i helped at all

Good luck!

congrats!!!

Thank you Anps!