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indiapart
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Hi guys,

I would love to hear Your critics about this theme: http://demo.dotwired.de/walterwhite_html/ Go and gimme stuff :D

Best regards.

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Anps
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cool template, what was the reason?

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indiapart
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cool template, what was the reason?

The common generic and cheap stuff. Not unique enough, should improve in graphics and features, etc. etc. and I dunno which point in fact is applying to the theme :)

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Anps
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Ok frew pointers.

Scanlines are to heavy… some nice background should be cool, more dept/effects its all to solid tho actually personally i dig it.

Icons could be done little better, and use more padding in that lower part. maybe use some cool easy shadowing. footer is to much like part of the page.

header, more padding that search box looks like its being forced there poor thing :)

those slider have any buttons for changing?

All the rollover effects should be shown with mouser over example.

footer needs more spacing.

Overall its to plain you have to spice it up to get uniqueness, since there are tons of similar templates. Amazing details should help you :)

Good luck

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corethemes
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Hello friend,

  • From what I see, your biggest issue is typography, the headers need to get larger and stand out, and you need to use better fonts.
  • Also, you have some inconsistent spacing issues, i.e. the top part and bottom part of the footer needs to be even.

Best of luck, Nikos

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KL-Webmedia
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Hey, awesome template! I really like it. I think you should add different portfolio styles, actually with different collumns. An option for different slider effects would also be a new feature, but wouldn´t improve the uniqueness of this design. I actually think it´s unique enough, but envato stuff often don´t think that way…

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This is really good! However, from my humble point of view i’ll tweak some things :

The 3last backgrounds are, in my opinion, way to strong. It disturbs the eyes. Then, you need more colors to bring your template to life, actually it is good, but more colors will make it really good (use more of this yellow?).

I join Anps for the icons, add more space at the bottom. And you might want to work more on that headline caption to make it attractive ?

Hope it helps :)

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