i am not really professional but what i see so far with your template is;
use a more serious looking font, change twit background to the same as counter numbers background
change that blackboard looking background to a plain gradient background under “what to expect”
take notify me (stay updated) column to the center and take location to the right
and use image instead of ” | ” as a seperator at the bottom links and make those links a bit more visible
and improve the text contrast
but then again, i am not a professional
Thanks gokhan214 for the advice.
The fonts dont work with one another.. .. its confusing
catch a harmony with a same background to the 3 boxes and the main background where it is pure white instead of using box shadow, leave it plain and use the same background as the other elements, make it look like the counter and twit background, bring harmony by doing it and use another font from google fonts and make sure your using sans serif not sans fonts and use a better seperator with a bit unique style between the boxes instead of a plain vertical line, i am sorry i ve said to much but trying to be fair
Thanks for your kind feedback gokhan. Working on it.
A lot need to improve on this design, best is to do a lot more research on themeforest library on similar items and identify their unique characters and start over with a fresh design.
- More organized layout - font - line spacing - shadows - follow 960 grid system
Make sure to do some research on popular items on the theme forest library.
Hope this helps, good luck.