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designsatnight says

Hi everybody

I uploaded an item to TF a few weeks ago, it got rejected because they felt some paddings and margins aren’t consistent enough, design is not unique enough, and things like that. I decided to create a completely new one instead of rebuilding the old one, so I started it.

it took me 3 weeks to complete the new one, they rejected it, but only thing they told me is that they don’t like the use of white spaces. they even told that they don’t want to tell me how to improve until it meets a “certain treshold”.

Here’s the link, I’d like to know if you guys have any advice on how to improve it, or point out the weak points, or just give an overall rating.

here’s the link

thank you designsatnight

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izithemes says

I think you do something sloppy. Ex on menu: Typography > Submenu|Submenu 2| Sub 3.

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designsatnight says
izithemes said
I think you do something sloppy. Ex on menu: Typography > Submenu|Submenu 2| Sub 3. ...

true but I’d be surprised if that would be the reason

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designsatnight says

anyone else?

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rohithpaul says
designsatnight said
anyone else?

Hi,

I think, You have to add more graphical elements to the current design. The font looks good, but you have to work on details, also utilize white-space wisely, eg. header – near to logo, between column, navigation, Rightsidebar. Also your footer is very plain, I suggest you to remove current footer and build a new one from scratch.

:) Best of luck

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designsatnight says
rohithpaul said
designsatnight said
anyone else?

Hi,

I think, You have to add more graphical elements to the current design. The font looks good, but you have to work on details, also utilize white-space wisely, eg. header – near to logo, between column, navigation, Rightsidebar. Also your footer is very plain, I suggest you to remove current footer and build a new one from scratch.

:) Best of luck

now that’s something useful thank you

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Nitro_Themes says

hey there

there is too much empty space above the footer on the left. I don’t think you should have that much empty space.

Cheers

Lester

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designsatnight says
mafloral said
hey there

there is too much empty space above the footer on the left. I don’t think you should have that much empty space.

Cheers

Lester

thank you that’s definetely a weak point I don’t know why it looks like that I’ll build a completely new one.

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rohithpaul says
designsatnight said
updated http://www.thysta.com/helion/test/
It seems like you have modified some stuff’s but, still white space issue is there, You must go through other templates and u’ll get inspiration, I know its frustrating, but my advice – If you submit the current one, you will get disappointed again. :)
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