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ronn0 says

Hello There,

My theme is rejected for 4 of 5 times now, there were tips the times before, but now there won’t.

You have made great improvements in typography but there are still some areas that will need further refinements to meet our criteria. You might consider starting a thread in the forums to get the opinions and ideas of other members. I know this process can be frustrating and I thank you for your patience. I think the template is almost there, it just needs a little more refinement.

Now I ask you for your opinion and some tips or ideas.

http://www.ronoerlemans.nl/demos/123creative/1_homepage.html

Thanks for reading.

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jremick Envato team says

Hey ronn0, your link isn’t pulling up the template. The tips in previous messages still apply to the template. I hope this helps. I’ll post more tips as soon as I have more time.

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ronn0 says

The Correct url is: http://www.ronoerlemans.nl/demos/123creative/index.html

Hopefully an admin can change this.

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DDStudios says

Ok , this is the first time I want to buy a theme for my portfolio. I think it look awesome and it shows you have a lot of design skills but there is a few thing I would change.

1 – Not sure about the logo not being aligned with the content .. maybe the content area should be as wide as the top bar ..

2 – The box under the text ’’Web design’’ ’’CMS’’ etc should be the same as the first one (with the slider) wich look amazing. It would look a lot cleaner.

3 – There should be a page for ’’More information’’ , a fully detailed page for an item.

4 – An arrow button to switch for the featured project would be necessary.

5 – PNG transparency should be fixed with IE6 .

Overall , awesome start .. I understand if you don’t change it like I want but I really think you should continue to work on it.

Thanks !

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DDStudios says

You know what ? I want this theme , really. If you want some help , send me your PSDs and I’ll help you with this one .. I’ll send you my revision and you will be the one to take the decision at the end.

I won’t ask anything for my time , I just really love your start with this design and I want to refine it and use it after.

If you don’t like what I do with the PSDs , its ok but I would really like to give it a try.

If you look at my theme , they are good but not awesome because I really wasnt in the mood last 2-3 month (GF problem) so don’t take your decision on that.

What do you think ?

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patriotfan says

I like it alot

Once you improve it, I might buy ;)

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ronn0 says
Ok , this is the first time I want to buy a theme for my portfolio. I think it look awesome and it shows you have a lot of design skills but there is a few thing I would change.

1 – Not sure about the logo not being aligned with the content .. maybe the content area should be as wide as the top bar ..

2 – The box under the text ’’Web design’’ ’’CMS’’ etc should be the same as the first one (with the slider) wich look amazing. It would look a lot cleaner.

3 – There should be a page for ’’More information’’ , a fully detailed page for an item.

4 – An arrow button to switch for the featured project would be necessary.

5 – PNG transparency should be fixed with IE6 .

Overall , awesome start .. I understand if you don’t change it like I want but I really think you should continue to work on it.

Thanks !

I really wanna thank you for your tips and ideas, thank you very much.

I try to fix this points.

I like it alot

Once you improve it, I might buy ;)

Thanks, i gonne improve this.

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DDStudios says

np ;)

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ronn0 says

The new index, I have to put in over on XHTML /CSS.

http://www.ronoerlemans.nl/wp-content/uploads/2009/03/1_homepage.jpg

Some other ideas?

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DDStudios says

Wow , love it .. maybe the font of the menu a little smaller than the logo would be better.

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