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luckykind says

I think you’ve got some nice design concepts there (the overlay-ed slider, the nav bar, the hover over images effect)...

but to be honest… there’s a lack of definition… everything is so soft and light. It’s like staring at a light bulb or a hazy morning… some of the soft blue on soft grays make it hard to focus/read… even when switching themes there’s some color/definition issues… many elements of the design are taking away from users being able to focus on the content…

however, it’s got potential and that’s more than I can say about many of the other rejected threads that pop up here… i’d write the reviewer back and ask their opinion…

good luck… :)

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PixelStores says

Hmm, don’t know what to make of this theme, very unique for sure. I would remove the gray background and make it white, leave the navigation as it is but perhaps use a light cyan drop shadow and remove the cyan bar.

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fuelthemes says

Too much shadow all I know

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ThemeShaper says

Thanks for your comments guys. Very useful feedback. Still waiting for some feedback from the reviewer, but I think I know how to proceed with it from here.

Cheers

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