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ZefWebDesign says

After having my first theme rejected I decided to take a break from it and make another. Now that has been rejected too with the standard rejection message! Significant improvements etc etc.

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I am determined to get a theme on here and I felt that this design was much better than my last one but obviously kailoon didn’t think so.

What do you think I can do to improve it?

Once again please be honest.

Thanks in advanced

Zef

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ZefWebDesign says

I’m thinking maybe I need to add more to the front page, like maybe another widgets section just above the recent post slider?

What do you think?

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KarmaThemes says

Definitely better than the Skyscraper! But it might be the good old slider + 3 columns issue everyone suffers from these days.

All the best, GC

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ZefWebDesign says

Cheers glossycat!

Yeah your probably right. Do you think I should add some more layout options to the frontage then?

Thanks again!

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KarmaThemes says

Hi again!

Definitely worth considering adding some layout options!

Greetings,
GC

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Landonw says

The menu looks horrible, too.

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ZefWebDesign says
The menu looks horrible, too.

That is not really a very helpful comment :-S how do you think it could be improved? Do you not like the hover, the border, the background or what?

Your opinion is appreciated but that was very vague and doesn’t really help me.

Thanks anyway

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LukeWilde says

The footer background looks bad, the image looks really low quality or something, just doesnt look nice. Maybe just keep it a plain colour or a faint noise to it.

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ZefWebDesign says

Cheers for the suggestion luke! I will definitely look into it.

Thanks again

Zef

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ZefWebDesign says

Any more suggestions guys? Or basically just add some more layout options to the front page, change the footer bg a bit, and try and make the menu look better.

How close do you think I am with this theme? I was hoping that I might at least get the next rejection letter up where the reviewer actually tells you what to improve haha

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